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2012 Writing Goals (+ Molten update)

Hello, and welcome to 2012. It’s going to be a great year! Do you have your writing (or other) goals/intentions articulated, yet? Here are mine.

FOCUS–2012 is going to be all about nurturing my creativity. My focus can be summed up thus: Don’t try; just be yourself. & don’t give up. Trust the characters, the story, and your creative process. (Stay tuned for related Molten update, at the end of this post.) Without further ado…

Author Goals 2012:

  1. Finish draft 12 of Molten
  2. Proofread-via-Kindle Molten
  3. Query Molten—at least 3/mo (total of 33 in 2012), or until I sign with literary agent
  4. Edit YA dystopian WIP
  5. Send draft 3 (or 4) of dystopian to betas
  6. Edit dystopian post-beta-feedback (no more than 3 additional drafts)
  7. Proofread-via-Kindle dystopian
  8. Book proposal for dystopian
  9. Submit/query dystopian
  10. Write, edit, and submit for publication at least one short story
  11. Draft a new novel
  12. And, of course, continue to build author-related relationships via social networking & blog
  13. Reading goal: Read 50 books (having never before counted my reads, this may turn out to be an insane goal for me; we’ll see)

1st Quarter Author Goals:

Jan:

  1. Finish draft 13 of Molten
  2. Proofread-via-Kindle Molten
  3. 5-10 personalized queries for Molten
  4. (Optional) Draft creepy short story

Feb:

  1. Send first round Molten queries
  2. (Optional) Synop for Molten
  3. Read straight through dystopian SNP
  4. Synop of dystopian (for me)
  5. Draft 2 of dystopianstructural + (optional) fill in blank spaces

March: NaNoRevisMo

  1. Draft 3 of dystopian—edit text all the way through (Beta-review draft)
  2. Send second round Molten queries

Peeking ahead to the 2nd quarter: While dystopian is with betas, write pitch & synop. Submit/pitch/query dystopian by end of May, at latest.

Molten Update:

I planned to tell a long story about how I came to the realization I’m about to share, but I’ve been journaling all day and I’m tired, so I’ll just share the essence. On Jan 31–in other words, last year, but also just yesterday–I had a conversation with the hero of Molten. And he says he’s a vampire. The de-vamped experiment is thus over. I got three things out of  the experiment: 1. I wished I’d written in present tense; I no longer do. I like the past-tense version. 2. I wasn’t sure I’d gotten up all the metaphorical bones of the story. After reviewing the novel, I’ve filled in the holes I found, but for the most part those were small. It hangs together as a whole. So well, in fact, that I havn’t been able to make the de-vamped plot work. 3. I’d come to doubt my choice to write a vampire book at this time. I no longer do. This is the story that came to me, and the story I want to write. I knew that when I started, and it’s good to be remindedMolten is, in essence, a about a guy who will not give up on that which he loves. How can I do any less for him and his story?

This decision is reflected in the goals above. I ache a little about it–for the character possibilities I saw that will now never live, at least not in this book–but I think the ache is just part of the process.I remain, as always, willing to be wrong about this. If an epiphany to the contrary strikes, I’ll get back to you ;) .

[Update, Feb 17, 2012: You know how I said I was willing to be wrong? Well Shortly after writing this, I began to dream about the de-vamped version, and I realized I had missed something obvious. Something that makes the whole novel work without vampires just as well, if not better, than it worked before. I am deep in a vampire-free edit of Molten right now, and I am sooo excited about it. Because the changes come out of the universe I already created, they are fairly straightforward. For the bulk of the book, I'm keeping the words I already have, and I'm sticking with past tense. The muse really does works in mysterious ways. Stay tuned for updates!]

Happy 2012!

p.s. Oh! I just realized I forgot to share a token person goal. Want to know what I’ll be up to in 2012? Well, I’d like to go on at least one in-person date. Wish me luck!

2011 Writing Retrospective

Hi, all. Ready to wish adieu to 2011? I am. Starting with a review of the goals I set 365 days ago. (Original goal in black, notes in orange.)

1. Revise Book 1 and have it proofread. √ <– by which I mean, “check,” not “square root” ;)

2. Query at least 3 agents/month until I gain representation. This goal is still in the works, so I’ll just sum it up by giving myself a √. Agent feedback prompted me to return to the manuscript to a) edit again for a stronger (quicker) opening, & b) see if the book can be re-written without the vampires.

3. Write Book 2. I wrote about 40K on this book, 20K of which I figured was usable, and which I also edited. Then I put it aside to attend to the above edits, especially since if I end up going with the de-vamped version, this sequel is unlikely to work.

4. Make money in writerly and writing-friendly ways. (Still clarifying the shape(s) this will take. In addition to novels, possibilities include coaching and copywriting.) Attempted. Got a job for a resume writing company. Hated it–felt it took mental energy from my novels. Decided to revaluate my budget to avoid need of this extra job.

5. Upgrade my website. √ Tried two new versions, actually. I <3 this one. Pretty, no?

6. Continue social networking. 

7. (Optional) Edit Book 2.

8. (Optional) Write, edit, and submit “experiment project.” This beginning of this project is in the metaphorical drawer. Maybe it’ll come out some day, maybe not. 

In my mid-year goal review, I replaced this goal with “Draft YA dystopian Shiny New Project.” For this I get a √. Thanks to NaNoWriMo for getting me started. Thanks to me for finishing. *patting self on back*

9. Read good novels. 

My favorite reads of 2011: Forbidden by Tabitha Suzuma. The Vampire Academy series by Richelle Mead (yes, I know I’m a bit late in reading this,) the Darkest Powers  series by Kelley Armstrong, & The Willows: Havenby Hope Collier.

On Goodreads? Compare favorite books with me at Goodreads.com/layla_messner.

Lastly, the two personal goalsI mentioned: “deep-self-listening practice” & “wear perfume.” √√ Two resounding successes.

Stay tuned tomorrow for 2012 Writing Goals and, in the meantime *sets off fireworks* enjoy the party.

p.s. My writing highlight of 2011: meeting 2500 wds/weekday goals from Nov 1 through Dec 20. What about you?

News, NaNo & Turning of the Year Goals

Well, it’s been a while, hasn’t it. *rubs hands together* Where to start?

Accomplishments:
1. NaNoWriMo: I wrote 57K words this November. Rah!!
Aprox 10K of those were for Molten (vamped and de-vamped), the balance were my SNP (shiny new project)–the YA dystopian idea that came to my on my camping trip this past summer.

2. 2500 words/day. Since Nov 1, I’ve written at least that many words each weekday, with only two exceptions (the day I moved rooms, and the day I wrote extra words the day before.) *proudness*

3. I’ve been running 5 days/week, and doing quick AM Pilates 6 days/week for three weeks. *more proudness*

4. (This isn’t really an accomplishment, but) I ready The Now Habit: A strategic program for overcoming procrastination and enjoying guilt-free play, by Neil Fiore
It’s awesome, and I completely recommend it. *big thumbs up*

Molten vamped/de-vamped update:
Remember how I’m playing around with de-vamping (taking the vampires out of) my first novel, Molten? I originally thought I’d use the first 20-30K of the vamped version and basically write the rest of the book from scratch. I planned to use NaNo to draft all those extra words, and I started November with that intention. Well, after a week of re-writing the same few scenes, it became obvious that I don’t have that many new words for this projet. If the re-write is going to work it’s got to be a pretty much direct replacement (vamps out, other plot point in) using the words I already have. I look forward to seeing what happens.

In the meantime, while continuing to draft the dystopian project, I’m chipping away at the last few edits on the vamped version with a tighter beginning. Soon that will be ready to go back out on query. Yay!

Writing Goals & Self-imposed Deadlines:
Dec 21: 80K on Dystopian. Or finish draft 1, whichever comes first. (I’d love to finish, just to say I wrote* a book this year. But in the greater scheme of things more words is better, because I cut a LOT when I edit. Of course, if I write a bunch more just to boost the word count, I’ll just end up cutting it. So I’ll write until I run out of plot.)
* Where “wrote” = drafted.

**optional** Dec 21: Complete final edits on vamped version of Molten.

Dec 22-Jan 1: VACATION!

Jan 13: First draft of Dystopian finished. (This leaves aprox. 6 weeks of “sitting” time before NaNoRevisMo.)

Jan 31: Vamped Molten proofread + one round (5-10) highly personalized queries ready.

**optional** Jan 31: 1st 50 pages polished of De-vamped version.

Feb: Work on De-vamped re-write Draft 1

March: NaNoRevisMo – Dystopian

Well, there you have it. What is everyone else up to? Belated congrats to all the NaNo winners!

I suck at giving up, but excel at changing my mind (I’m still vamping. Also: Ready, Set, NaNo)

I admitted to myself a few days ago that giving up on my vamps was making me depressed (I LOVE vampires, especially mine), and it was precipitous to switch directions so close to a finished draft with a stronger beginning. So I buckled down and just finished a vampire-inclusive Draft 12. Right on time to enter a couple Nov contests. Yay! The really good news is that the more I attempted to take the vamps out, the more I realized what a cohesive whole the book really is. I believe I’ve found those last few missing bones (archeology metaphore, see this post), to make the manuscript feel whole.

As I mentioned, I plan to enter contests and query again. In the meantime, NaNoWriMo (who’s with me?) should reveal whether the Devamped version has a life of its own. And I no longer feel as though I’ve given up, but like I’m playing around with my manuscript–much more fun!

I’m de-vamping my novel

If I’ve told you anything about my first novel, this is probably what I said, “It has vampires in it.” Which means that you are once more about to know next to nothing about it–I’ll remedy that in a minute–because I’m taking the vampires out.

I started querying in at the beginning of April (fyi: as my fellow writers know, six months is not very long to spend querying) and I’ve received some comments from agents who like/love my premise, but don’t feel optimistic about selling a YA vamp paranormal romance right now. This alone is not enough to warrant the re-write, in my opinion. I believe that there will always be vampire love stories and that they will continue to enjoy wide readership. But, these agent comments did get me wondering.

Could this story be true to itself without vampires in it?

I’d asked myself this before, when I was still writing and looking for agents to query, and I kept coming across agent bios that specified, “NO VAMPIRES.” The answer was always, “No.” My tale was a vampire story because the plot necessitated that creature. (Well, zombies would have worked, but they just don’t do anything for me.) There just wasn’t anything else I could use. I LOVE vampire stories myself. And, as I mentioned, I believe vampfic will continue to sell because people like the read it.

But, recently, I got to talking with my buddy Hope Collier who reminded me of something a fact that should have been obvious: I’m a writer; I can just make it up. That got me thinking some more and, long story short, I came up with a way to write vampires out of the story. The question then became: would this re-write be truer to the soul of the story than the vampire version? I have been meditating on this since the beginning of September.

Option 1. Stick with the vampires (at least for now.) Do one more edit (including a faster paced opening), and continue querying. If I don’t find my agent match, I can always try out the other idea.

Option 2: Shelve the vampire version and do a major overhaul following this new idea. If it doesn’t work, I can always return to the vampires.

I was originally going to go with a mix. Edit the vampire version, and while querying that, experiment with the new version. But I’ve decided to go full-out with Option 2, and here’s why. In On Writing, Stephen King gives a metaphor of novel-writing as an excavation–the writer’s goal is to see how much of the skeleton she can unearth–and I have always felt I didn’t get the whole shebang with this story. Now, I think this is always true; you don’t ever get all of it. And I think another edit might get just enough more. And I truly believe that, if I continued querying, I would eventually find the agent who loved the vampire-version enough to sell it. BUT, now that I have the new idea, I have this feeling I can’t shake that replacing the vampires will unearth a lot more of skeleton (get me to the story behind the story, if you will), and I have to find out if that’s true.

So, I am de-vamping my novel (and, as I said above, I can always return to the original manuscript if the hunch turns out to be wrong. Or if I get an offer from one of the agents still reviewing it!)

This re-write is also going to include the faster-paced opening, and I am translating the story from first person past, to first person present tense. I have long felt that if I could do one thing differently with this book, I would have written it in present tense, because I feel it suits my voice better. I was talking with Lorna Suzuki on Twitter the other day, and she commented in passing that she’d originally planned to write three Imago books, but ended up writing nine! Well, I’d been thinking, “Hey, past tense is fine. Hopefully, I’ll write a trilogy, and then I can do my next book in present tense.” Oops. Gonna go ahead and take care of that now. And I am aiming for the new version to be about 8,000 words longer, for a total of 70K.

My goals for the next month and a half are as follows:

October: New beginning (√ done). Work through ms converting past–>present & replacing vampire elements. Cut what won’t work.

November (NaNoWriMo): Write 50K new words from which to take the extra words I need to make 70K (I won’t need  full 50K, which is good, because I tend to cut 30-40% of my raw material.)

Oh, and to go along with the re-write, I have also completely revamped my website (ironic, isn’t it?).

Now, the part you’ve been waiting for. I promised to make up for doing away with the one bit of info I’d given about my novel, and I will. I have a new title, a logline, AND an excerpt (aren’t you glad you read, or skimmed, all the way down?). Click here to find out.

Wish me luck

I haven’t been doing a very good job of keeping my blog updated, but I have been writing, and even tracking my writing time (for the most part). So I don’t feel all that tracking was for naught, here’s my “daily writing” record since I sent “Book 1″ to my proofreader on March 9. As you can see, I’ve been focusing on my query letters.

Monday (March 14): 1:45+ hrs on queries

Tuesday: 1:30+ hrs queries/preparing blog for design upgrade

Wednesday: 2:15+ hrs queries

Thursday: 2:45 hrs queries

Monday (Today): 2+ hrs queries

I also worked on Thursday, March 10 at the hairdresser, and on both weekends. Go me ;) . & moving on…

My letters are finally starting to feel finished, and I’m really loving that. Since my ms is out with the proofreader and should be back soon, this seems like a great time to say a few words about what’s going to happen next.

As soon as it comes back, I will make the proof corrections, and then my first round of queries will start to quietly go out. This includes any fulls that I owe already. I apologize for being deliberately vague here; this is one part of the process I want to keep under wraps for now, and y’all can expect NOT to be updated until I sign with an agent. (Please note: that “until” was intended as an affirmation, not as an arrogant declaration). As I turn my focus back to “Book 2,” I will continue to track my writing process here. I will also be messing with my site design, so I ask, in advance, for your patience while I work out any bugs with the layout.

Last but not least, I want to take a moment to thank all of you who have followed along and cheered for me as I completed “Book 1″ and I look forward to the day when–again, this is an affirmation, not an arrogant declaration–I can report that I have representation (oh, and finally tell you what the book is about; I haven’t forgotten that ;) ).

Thanks! And please wish me luck :) .

With fingers crossed and all of that,

Láyla

Done! (This part of the process)

Book 1 is…*Tremendous Drumroll Please*…off to my proofreader. Yipeeeee!

Proofreading Draft (Draft 7-ish) came in at just under 62K

You might get another “Done!” post when I complete my proofreading changes. In the meantime, it’s a much needed break, and finalizing my round-1 queries.

Then, of course, there’s Book 2…

My manuscript is back

My manuscript is back, so…

Today: 3 hrs reading suggestions from freelance editor.

You can’t see me, but I am doing the happy-to-be-revising dance right now.

Draft “4″ ready for freelance editor

Today: 5:30 hrs editing

to FINISH draft 4, which is now formatted and ready to print for tomorrow’s on-time send off to my writing mentor/freelance editor for feedback. Woot!

Wordcount:

1st Draft Done

Alright, it’s official: I now have my first draft.

So,
Phase 1 – 1st Draft:

Phase 2 begins:
Today: 2 hrs editing/ +142 wds

+ 2 hrs writing group

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